Your Art & Poetry

[alliecatt24]

Exhaustion invites itself into my peace,
meanless words crawl through my head
love in my heart lacks to cease
Confusion and anger as disease has spread.

Is love yet gentle nor sweet?
Curiosity drives my mind round
As this question tends to repeat
For I wish not to hear sound

Whispers follow my shadows as prey
Shallowness is a quality of repeat
For my tears purposely do not obey
In sorrow, my heart and soul ly in defeat.

[roselove445]

i think the poem its self is great amazing even. i think you might want to rethink the title though. im not sure it really fits the poem and i dont think spokeless is really a word. have you thought about sending this in to a magizeen to be published

hope my comments helped and never stop writing

alex

[cestin_forever]

i love it <3 my favorite stanza is the last one.  but good job!