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Well, my tongue language isn't english so i may have grammatical mistakes so I need u to help me rewrite this with no mistakes
Thank you in advance.
Poem is: i still cant find a title for it. U can suggest

It was a fake feeling
Towards a silly one.
To him, I was lying
Just to have fun.
But suddenly, he became
The dearest one to me,
He also felt the same
That together we would live in glee
He said "I love you, dear
To lose you is my only fear
You are the sun that lights my day
Okay now baby what ya say?"
I couldn't stop my tongue
That was the second I waited all days long
"Sorry baby, I've lied to you
But I swear now I love you too"

 

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